February 23, 2017, 05:47:44 AM

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CanonFanBoy

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Tara
« on: October 13, 2016, 06:25:11 PM »
My friend Tara.
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Tara
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Re: Tara
« Reply #1 on: January 28, 2017, 03:18:29 AM »
Like the first one the most. she is very beautiful
but i think light is bit warm on the left side. just my opinion.

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Re: Tara
« Reply #2 on: January 28, 2017, 05:55:49 AM »
Ok, here's a little C&C, always offered at great peril...

First, in the first two shots, I'm seeing just a hint of front focusing, where the collar is the sharpest point.

Second, in the first shot, the brightly exposed area of her camera-facing cheek and neck area draws the eyes away from her face and gaze, which, imo, does not serve the portrait well.

Third, nitpicking, in the first shot, I believe the eyes have been over-sharpened in post processing.

I like the second best.  Flattering, natural, an attractive subject complemented by a good background.  Is the t-shirt just overexposed?

The third shot, not my taste, and the front of her hair has gone gray.
« Last Edit: January 28, 2017, 09:45:14 AM by YuengLinger »

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Re: Tara
« Reply #3 on: January 28, 2017, 08:05:09 AM »
The positive: subject is very comfortable with you - way to go.
The negative: green cast. Choose your spot well. If wanting to shoot under trees, choose tall ones especially if the plant/tree is not part of the environmental portrait.

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Re: Tara
« Reply #3 on: January 28, 2017, 08:05:09 AM »