very nice video, good job on choosing the right musics, well directed shots, the audience can feel the emotions. Good job over all.
If u excuse me with some critics tough:
u have sometimes 1-2 more extra shots, and some clips are longer then it should be. Just some examples: in the beginning, glideing and moving behind the makeup shelves u have 1-2 more than it needed, also in the party u have an upwards total from the balcony -> transition -> and moving down back.
and the very last 2 clips, i think u have already made a nice defocus beggining-ending frame to the story, for me the same shot coming back again to be the very last picture, is a bit too much, it was already understandable and nicely closed picture the previous one.
(and a tipp: for the family, the muster material could be very funny without any editing after 5 years or so, just to check who looked how)
But the focus pulling, directing and compositing was very well done, i think you put a lot of work and energy into it.