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Re: Bikini girl in my studio with my first scenic bacground
« Reply #15 on: March 10, 2013, 10:50:58 AM »
I like this picture. I agree the background looks fake and the girl looks plastic but so what. I strongly believe the creator's main objective wasn't to make it "real" It was a look he was after and he did it very well. The background was done on purpose to look fake, it is after a "fake" scene. It's like telling a painter his painting looks fake..I believe the same applies here..if the creator meant to make it believable, then he failed, but if he meant for it to be in this certain "style" then he succeeded. Not every photo has to be realistic, just as not every painting need to be like a photograph..that's the whole point of both being an art form.

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« Reply #15 on: March 10, 2013, 10:50:58 AM »

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« Reply #16 on: March 10, 2013, 11:17:38 AM »
You had me a bikini... but lost me at a dearth of front meat.
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« Reply #17 on: March 10, 2013, 12:23:43 PM »
I'd suggest losing the hooker blue eye shadow and using a color that ties into the scene. Would love to see more from this series, perhaps with her looking down a bit? I for one don't think there's any 'dearth', I like the quantity! I would buy her a sandwich though. Yeah, level that background.

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« Reply #18 on: March 10, 2013, 12:25:48 PM »
I'm going to start putting "bikini" in the title all of my posts from now on . . . 8)

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« Reply #19 on: March 10, 2013, 03:11:35 PM »
I'm going to start putting "bikini" in the title all of my posts from now on . . . 8)
Great idea! A title like "Bikini street shots" will get a lot of visitors ;)

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« Reply #20 on: March 10, 2013, 03:15:27 PM »
I'm going to start putting "bikini" in the title all of my posts from now on . . . 8)
Great idea! A title like "Bikini street shots" will get a lot of visitors ;)
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Re: Bikini girl in my studio with my first scenic bacground
« Reply #21 on: March 10, 2013, 03:38:43 PM »
Thank you everybody to take your time for critic my picture, my goal was to make a theatrical picture
for the curve the next time i will make more attention when i place the backgroung
last week i make many lighting test with Dynalite ringflash i will post few pic monday
tank again for critic my work iam appreciate.

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« Reply #21 on: March 10, 2013, 03:38:43 PM »

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« Reply #22 on: March 10, 2013, 04:08:12 PM »
I think you are looking at the wrong curves.
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« Reply #23 on: March 10, 2013, 11:56:24 PM »
I think you are looking at the wrong curves.
I agree. Some people can't focus on the right stuff...
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« Reply #24 on: March 11, 2013, 10:33:31 PM »
I think you are looking at the wrong curves.
I agree. Some people can't focus on the right stuff...
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« Reply #25 on: March 12, 2013, 02:31:51 AM »
I think you are looking at the wrong curves.
I agree. Some people can't focus on the right stuff...
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Re: Bikini girl in my studio with my first scenic bacground
« Reply #26 on: March 12, 2013, 04:03:04 AM »
I was only able to notice the background because I like to look more at the lower part...  ;D  Maybe, removing that bikini will make this picture a lot better?  ;)

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Re: Bikini girl in my studio with my first scenic bacground
« Reply #27 on: April 21, 2013, 04:33:24 PM »
I would look to the hard shadows in an otherwise cleanly lit image which stand out for me. Under the arm pit and chin. Perhaps a general fill bounced off a wall behind you to take out these black holes?
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« Reply #27 on: April 21, 2013, 04:33:24 PM »

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« Reply #28 on: May 29, 2013, 08:28:34 PM »
GUYS... there is no curve on Bckg... her curves make u think there a curve

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Re: Bikini girl in my studio with my first scenic bacground
« Reply #29 on: May 30, 2013, 12:44:53 AM »
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I don't think anything about the background is meant to look realistic.
Background? What background???

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« Reply #29 on: May 30, 2013, 12:44:53 AM »