I don't know I think it's better than the original image in this thread.
if your serious then i not only pity your taste but wonder about how you can ignore the technical flaws in the composit.
Of course I wasn't Some of the people in this thread seemed to be unaware of this technique, so I spent 30 seconds searching for a tutorial that would give them the basic idea. You seemed to miss the point when you thanked me for the crap example.
5D Mk III, Elan 7e, Fuji X-E1, some old rangefinders
Tamron 24-70 2.8 VC, Canon 70-200 f/2.8L IS II, 400mm f/2.8L II, 100mm L IS Macro, Sigma 85mm, 50mm, & 35mm f/1.4's, Rokinon 14mm f/2.8, Canon 2x Extender II, Kenko 1.4x, 430 EX II, Elinchroms