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Re: Need advice, what can I do to improve?
« Reply #15 on: April 26, 2013, 01:49:46 PM »
I would say 7 is the weakest image. It's a picture of a tree with a girl in the corner. Always pay attention to the background and any other distracting things in the frame.
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Re: Need advice, what can I do to improve?
« Reply #15 on: April 26, 2013, 01:49:46 PM »

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Re: Need advice, what can I do to improve?
« Reply #16 on: June 17, 2013, 01:18:31 AM »
I'm always trying to improve my client's poses, and that is one thing you can work on.  Get a physical book or find them online and print them out.  Bring them to the session and share them.  See what the client likes/dislikes.

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Re: Need advice, what can I do to improve?
« Reply #17 on: July 11, 2013, 11:59:00 PM »
Overall the pictures look very nice.  The first thing I noticed is that they all appear to be too soft, possibly out of focus.  While I am no expert, I firmly believe that the eyes should be tack-sharp.  That would be my biggest focus (no pun intended), then concentrate on the shadows and filling them in.
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Re: Need advice, what can I do to improve?
« Reply #18 on: July 12, 2013, 02:17:58 AM »
Look good too me.

I would suggest better use of space (crop), lose glasses as they make nose look too long, focus is off, and control flare.

Keep up the good work.

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Re: Need advice, what can I do to improve?
« Reply #18 on: July 12, 2013, 02:17:58 AM »