Thanks, looks good.
You have the 'wow' shot of the stars in the desert. But that footage doesn't match the rest of the video.
Seems like a bunch of nice shots put to music. A bit slow and I didn't watch it through. Maybe there is more, but I didn't care to continue, and so I skipped through.
You are intelligent and very concerned with the artistic things in life. You seem a bit stuck in an invisible box. Maybe relax and just communicate what is important to you, and then the beauty of your visuals will have something to reflect.