Welcome to the forum,
Couple of nice shots, second one is full of action, flared for landing air brake deployed!
Looks to me that despite the cropping and window glass in the way you pretty much nailed these shots.
newby here and it's been wonderful seeing all the wonderful photos posted Here are a couple of mine taken in my backyard through a window. Taken with Canon 5D II with 70-200 IS 2.8. Had to really crop these in. Looking to add at least a 400 MM to my gear but for right now, doing lots of practicing of BIF
7DII+Grip, 7D+Grip, 40D+Grip, 5D+Grip, EF 24-105 f4L EF-S 17-85, EF-S 10-22, EF 70-200 f2.8 L IS II, EF 2x III, Σ150-500, Σ17-70 f2.8-4 C, EF 50mm f1.8, 550EX, Triopo TR-985, Godox FC-16, Filters Remotes Macro tubes Tripod heads etc!
5D, 20D, 24-105, BG-E4, BG-E2N, 17-85, Nifty 50 pre owned. 😀