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chauncey

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droplet C&C needed
« on: February 14, 2014, 11:09:42 AM »
I have something special in mind for this image...nitpick it to death please.



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droplet C&C needed
« on: February 14, 2014, 11:09:42 AM »

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Re: droplet C&C needed
« Reply #1 on: February 14, 2014, 11:52:42 AM »
nitpick it to death please

You asked…   ;)

I like the concept, and I like the droplet itself.  But…

  • The bright yellowish line on the leaf is very distracting
  • The leaf should be sharp throughout, it's not
  • Not a fan of the brown leaf, especailly with the purple background; a green leaf would be better
  • The transition from leaf to droplet is poorly handled - color at leaf tip is odd, line across leaf looks unnatural
  • A more homogenous background might be better, or at least not the vertical edges of a different hue, an oval might work better
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Re: droplet C&C needed
« Reply #2 on: February 14, 2014, 01:00:17 PM »
John...that is precisely what I was looking for...thanks much.      ;)

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Re: droplet C&C needed
« Reply #2 on: February 14, 2014, 01:00:17 PM »