Brenda & Tristan

[dpinparis]

Some shots from my photoshoot with Tristan and Brenda. Feedback welcome.

 Tristan shot with canon 5D3  100mm f2.8L macro @ f5.6 160 ISO 100


Brenda shot with canon 5D3 85MM 1.2L II @ f5.6 160 ISO 100

[Bosman]

Some shots from my photoshoot with Tristan and Brenda. Feedback welcome.

 Tristan shot with canon 5D3  100mm f2.8L macro @ f5.6 160 ISO 100


Brenda shot with canon 5D3 85MM 1.2L II @ f5.6 160 ISO 100

Id rather see the same process for the couple on their images. While i like the faded look it isn't contrasty at all in Tristans image and my eye cant settle anywhere of interest, brenda however is very easy to lock into her eyes. I don't like critiquing but that is based on how i felt which is what i believe makes a photo powerful is how a person feels when viewing it.

[dpinparis]

Thanks.  I should have made it clear, they were not a couple, though they were shot on the same day. I posted them together because I was too lazy to create separate threads. 

Thanks for your feedback.

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