3413 is your keeper. I'd crop a little tighter--esp the head. Exposure looks very good on face and background. Next two, poses not flattering, background a bit unpleasant as light falls off. Last one ok, but little stray lock of hair is a no-no.
Smiles look slightly tense...Did you have little time with subject?
Thanks so much for the feedback I really am learning from all of it.
a headshot-3605 by johnnacionphotography, on Flickr
a headshot-3604 by johnnacionphotography, on Flickr
The first picture here I don't really like for 2 reasons, the expression on the girls face is to created and second your point of view is to high according me, so you are really looking down on the girl.
The second photo (3604) however is very nice. Nice photo, nice expression on the face of the girl, something mystique, love it. Congratulations, keep going on
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