Desire to Dream (Short film with the 60D)

Hi guys,
Been a while since I last posted. Having said that I've worked on another short film and just wanted to share it here :p

Named it "Desire to Dream" and its about a recent high school graduate, Galante Gao, who deals with an accident that caused him to become deaf and aphonic (unable to speak). He struggles with his transition to university, as he can no longer study music and believes that his friends have abandoned him due to his disabilities.

Looking back, the story could have been so much better.. But eh, guess its all about just giving it a shot and improving next time? Most of the shots were made with the 24-105mm and the 60D, though the 70-200mm 2.8 (non-is) was used for shots like the fight scene.. You really need IS or a stabiliser rig to make the shots usable from non-is lenses.. (though if you wanna see some decent looking shots with the 70-200 2.8 non-is, check out this trailer i made: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l8npwcSshKs"

Anyways, heres the link to the short film: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dQT8rt5QcA8

Would love to get some feedback in terms of cinematography and story in general!