Let me say that I don't shoot video at all, and I don't shoot weddings. I haven't been to one I think since my last and only one,23 years ago, so I thought I would check it out.
I read the comments and mine are not as sophisticated.
Overall, I like how the video shows the timeline- obviously a long day compressed nicely into 7 min.
In the beginning going to the church, I wished the camera was in portrait, or zoomed out so the top of the church could be seen.
In the church, the couple talking was a bit hard to understand (granted I have hearing problems), so maybe you need to get a wireless mic for them
My favorite part was directly after the wedding of the couple outside. Really captured the feeling with the looks in the eyes, the gentle kisses, the veil flowing etc. I liked the part on the bridge. Interestingly, I didn't know where you were going when you moved into the bride and groom and then through them, but it was really cool.
The only minor thing was that at times, it seemed that transitions were too frequent or too fast.
That is my uneducated criticism, of great work. Hope it helps, not hurts.