Bikini girl in my studio with my first scenic bacground

PureShot

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Feb 14, 2013
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Thank you everybody to take your time for critic my picture, my goal was to make a theatrical picture
for the curve the next time i will make more attention when i place the backgroung
last week i make many lighting test with Dynalite ringflash i will post few pic monday
tank again for critic my work iam appreciate.
 

jeremypark

Sydney Photographer Jeremy Park
Apr 21, 2013
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www.jeremypark.com.au
I would look to the hard shadows in an otherwise cleanly lit image which stand out for me. Under the arm pit and chin. Perhaps a general fill bounced off a wall behind you to take out these black holes?
 
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