Noelia

She is a beautiful model from Badajoz

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Before we can critique it, we need to know what your artistic intentions were. Did you deliberately blow the background? The lighting looks a bit flat (look at her nose). There are no interesting shadows to give her face depth.

I don't know how you feel about retouching, but would you consider taking the hair off her arms?
 
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