How would you fix this RAW of 2 baby snow leopards

First two in Lightroom 4: Custom WB from foreground snow: exposure, clarity shadows, contrast: adj brush clarity, saturation, to big cat; desaturated background snow. Cropped one.

Second two CS5 RAW: Custom WB off snow in foreground
Exp .33 rec. 28 Blacks 55 brightness 30 contrast 46 clarity 35 vibrance 10 saturation -6, adj brush clarity exp brightness to eye. Cropped one.
 

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Hi!

Here's my take:
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All The Best!
Leszek
 
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Interesting to see how everyone's edits are so different. Here are mine - worked on them approximately 5-7 mins.
 

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I also felt this image lent itself to a portrait crop. When I cropped it in DPP, I also eliminated all in-camera sharpening as well as some color correction using 'click white balance' on the whiskers as others have done.

I moved the file into CS4 where I cloned out some distracting elements in the lower right of the frame, followed by re-sizing. I then adjusted the highlight and mid-tone contrast, increasing them slightly. I sharpened the image in Lab Mode to avoid artifacts and halos.

Here is the result...

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:)
 
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NotABunny said:
bran8 said:
Lightroom 4

Brilliant! I don't understand why most are trying to warm it up. It's unnatural.

Are we looking for mood, natural accuracy, or some combination thereof?

http://www.nwf.org/Kids/Ranger-Rick/Animals/Mammals/Snow-Leopards.aspx
"As you can see (above), snow leopards aren't the color of snow. They're colored like the rock habitat they live in"
Indeed, the source RAW file shows quite a bit of color that I daresay seems naturally accurate. IMHO it is more challenging to excite the sensuous aesthetic via a favorable presentation of the real - and for me that much more satisfying on the rare occasion that I have accomplished same. Please don't get me wrong; I am also wildly in favor of stylized interpretation, though I don't find it as challenging a concept. All I'm saying is let's be clear on goals before we decide to critique each other's approach to the challenge.... ;D
 
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IMHO the WB is off slightly and the natural color of the animal should be warmed up to be accurate. Not that I disagree with artistic license. I just prefer the animal to be rendered more realistically in this case. Also, I do like both the close up crop and the wider crop versions. I think it looks good both ways.

I find it interesting to see everyone's personal take on things and it is evident that tastes vary so enjoy the variety!
 
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It was actually quite easy & fast. Not much editing either. Wanted to keep a rather natural look and thus nothing fancy. I performed 3 steps:

1) Changed the White Balance
2) Used Curves
3) Applied Unsharp Mask

And if you count in resizing the image, then I performed 4 steps...
 

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Great shot! I've used lots of tools from LR, 30 minutes tops. (The most annoying thing is that it doesn't have blacks and whites from brushes because you have to be really careful with the global blacks and whites.)
 

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mdmphoto said:
NotABunny said:
bran8 said:
Lightroom 4

Brilliant! I don't understand why most are trying to warm it up. It's unnatural.

Are we looking for mood, natural accuracy, or some combination thereof?

http://www.nwf.org/Kids/Ranger-Rick/Animals/Mammals/Snow-Leopards.aspx
"As you can see (above), snow leopards aren't the color of snow. They're colored like the rock habitat they live in"
Indeed, the source RAW file shows quite a bit of color that I daresay seems naturally accurate. IMHO it is more challenging to excite the sensuous aesthetic via a favorable presentation of the real - and for me that much more satisfying on the rare occasion that I have accomplished same. Please don't get me wrong; I am also wildly in favor of stylized interpretation, though I don't find it as challenging a concept. All I'm saying is let's be clear on goals before we decide to critique each other's approach to the challenge.... ;D

Thank you for the info.

Considering that this photo isn't specifically made for color accuracy, feeling is what matters to me.

I had no idea what color their fur is in general. What felt wrong to me was the color of the snow (and the dark upper part). I haven't touched the white balance in my try (except for the eye). These snow leopards appear to be whiter than those from your link.

No matter what their color is, I expect snow to be slightly bluish, as the photo actually shows it, especially at high altitudes, and especially considering that the sun doesn't appear to have been strong in the photo. For example, in the first photo from your link, both the sky and the snow are slightly bluish.

Only now I've read that a flash was used and the photo was made at a zoo. It's possible that the blue light of the flash changed the color balance (which may explain why the fur is so white relative to the snow).
 
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