Jack Douglas said:Here is a sample of my single fill flash. I'm completely OK with any comments especially given that I don't really know what I'm doing. Criticism from those who know better is most helpful.
1D4 300 X1.4 1250th F4 ISO 640 HSS manual flash Camera was AE in this case, not sure why I didn't use manual.
Jack
Lonesome Dove (Canon 80D) by Dustin Abbott, on Flickrapplecider said:Jack the pileated is too nice to critique much. Making something up offsetting the flash might be fun to experiment with, getting some interesting shadows, but like I said that's a made up critique.
BTW where do you live?
Jack Douglas said:Here is a sample of my single fill flash. I'm completely OK with any comments especially given that I don't really know what I'm doing. Criticism from those who know better is most helpful.
1D4 300 X1.4 1250th F4 ISO 640 HSS manual flash Camera was AE in this case, not sure why I didn't use manual.
Jack
Valvebounce said:Hi Jack.
Ok you want criticism, well darn it man, at least do something wrong for us to find! ;D Seriously, to me it looks great, nicely balanced flash to ambient level, no red/steel eye, nice catchlight in the eye, subject sharp, background nicely OOF and not too busy.
Well done.
Cheers, Graham.
Jack Douglas said:Here is a sample of my single fill flash. I'm completely OK with any comments especially given that I don't really know what I'm doing. Criticism from those who know better is most helpful.
1D4 300 X1.4 1250th F4 ISO 640 HSS manual flash Camera was AE in this case, not sure why I didn't use manual.
Jack
5D3_1877 by Stuart Edwards, on Flickr
2016-04-08_01-53-52 by Stuart Edwards, on Flickr
2016-04-08_01-53-31 by Stuart Edwards, on Flickrlion rock said:Jack,
I think your pileated photos are tremendously nice.
I do see the catch light on the eyes, one on the photo left, and one at camera position but higher. Like the setup. I would like a bit of light to illuminate the area under the beak and chest. That area is a bit darker.
Please don't think I'm nit picking, the photos are exceptional! But if there is a willing guest willing to stay for a meal and a few photos, maybe it will be willing to be shot with a third light, lower and to the camera right.
BTW, the tree I selected for putting holes and suet finally came down altogether from recent high winds. I found a tree by our driveway that is being attacked but pileated. Just that the tree is not in a direction for a convenient unattended camera position. So, I can't be there all the time to wait for them to do their damage. A pesky thing called "work" to earn funds for the 200-400 L. Hahaha ...
Keep posting your work. And hurry up to finish the floor and kitchen.
-r